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Jul 2014
Even after our fight about this immature girl, you tell me I have no worries, you want to give me the world  but as I look in your eyes I see her reflection, your desire for her, your hidden affection.

My skin still burning from your touch, I lay in your arms and you say that you have missed me so much but as I look in your eyes I still see her reflection, your desire for her, your hidden affection.

Now the time has come when
you have pushed me away, telling me this is no longer my home, that I can not stay. As I fight back the anger and tears and start to walk away, I look back in your eyes and still see her reflection. A smile on her face, her desire for control, her hidden agenda, I am finally gone no more affection.
First draft. First poem posted. Need feedback.
Dawn Maiers
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Dawn Maiers  Spokane, WA
(Spokane, WA)   
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