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May 2014
When all has come undone
That is when you've truly won
The ones who are winning are actually in last
What's done is done
Its in the past
Now your true story has begun
Its time for a recast
Don't be a fool and do a re-run
Move on fast
& learn what's fun!
Thought id try something a bit different this time.
The start text is about having nothing left to lose because only when we have nothing left to lose are we truly free.
Any feedback is muchly appreciated.
Rae
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Rae  25/F/Australia
(25/F/Australia)   
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