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Courtney Snodgrass
Poems
Apr 2014
Triangle Flags and Dog Tags
This is just to say,
I drove to the cemetery and visited your grave today.
A tear rolled slowly down my cheek
And in my legs, I grew weak.
In the air, I felt the warm breeze,
And I knew that you were watching me kneel upon my knees.
The clouds rolled away and the sun kissed my face,
I was used to distance, but this was too much space.
I ask for forgiveness for being such a wreck,
As I touch the dog tags that now hang around my neck
There was no way that I could understand
Why I was left holding a folded triangle flag within my hand.
I cursed the war that brought ruin to my life,
I cursed the war for claiming my wife.
this is kind of a rough draft... but feedback is always appreciated and encouraged :)
#death
#military
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