Nov 2013
I tried to be a link in the chain
chaining myself to the drain
draining me, trying to remain
remaining to stay there in pain
it was just too hard to stay
staying free so that i can play
playing where the willows sway
swaying in the breeze all day
I never liked running with a pack
packing it up and not coming back
backing up my own plan of attack
attacking life and giving no slack
chaining myself to the drain
draining me, trying to remain
remaining to stay there in pain
it was just too hard to stay
staying free so that i can play
playing where the willows sway
swaying in the breeze all day
I never liked running with a pack
packing it up and not coming back
backing up my own plan of attack
attacking life and giving no slack
A quantum loop poem is when the last word is used in a different form. A double quantum is when it has rhymes for first and last words. They can be written in different ways. :)
