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Palindromic Angel
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4d
Echoes Of Us— Act One—The Bitter Burn Of Whiskey
First love,
These words, unspoken and raw,
years pass, yet your shadow lingers,
etched into the sound of a worn vinyl record.
There is a place in our minds,
Where it plays in your living room,
Endlessly, since the night we fell.
I recall the verse of the song you played,
a fragile confession of why you are broken,
while you kept parts of yourself hidden,
guarding a truth that’s too painful to own.
That sacred moment,
a scar that whispers secrets,
too brittle to survive.
Now I wander through hallways of our past,
your green eyes,
piercing the hollow spaces of memory,
haunting me with the weight of what was lost.
The bitter burn of whiskey,
the residue of regret,
these remain,
reminders of the words you never spoke,
the ones I needed to heal.
My longest poem broken down scene by scene. Sketches for my sweetheart the drunk.
#firstlove
#heartbreak
#love
Written by
Palindromic Angel
F/Brisbane
(F/Brisbane)
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