I open my eyes, a dream wearing thin your perfumed breath settled into my skin I follow your path, to your voice I’m sworn a grasping hand that’s been struck by your thorn
you plucked me away in twinkling night air unweaving a shattering love undeclared no root could hold on, no voice would remain so I myself turn, and drift now away
there is no return to roads left behind just a dew glistened path-the pull of time no crown, no grave, no prayer left to free me here lies a rose which no king would envy
Would appreciate any feedback or notes- i really want to develop this one