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Dec 2024
think you've crossed a line
knowing you better, soured like a lime
I'll just toss it all behind
me, the dose I won't deny
and no, you don't need to remind
me, the fine lines have come to a subside
falling apart
has redeemed the heart
keeping to myself, degrades counting
them petals of a sad, sad serenade
backing it up in my mind's Ether
tickles feel like a fever
by all means
upon me it seems
you entering dreams
leads to "redeem me, oh redeem"
is actually you entering the subconscious
leaving violins, the absolute mess
acting like they couldn't care less
and there goes the hanging incense

                                                        ­­                                    ------ravenfeels
Raven Feels
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Raven Feels  F/NEPTUNE
(F/NEPTUNE)   
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     Maddy, ---, Emma, Scott Tizzard and Maybelater2
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