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Oct 22
[City Bridges (5th draft)]

Indigenous citizen
struggling to stay civilized
amidst
monolithic visages,
stone-faced and stoic witnesses;
overhead,
gargoyles grin—
hideous grimaces
guarding ever vigilant.

Inhospitable city grid
dimly lit,
rain's residual liquid
slicks
gritty asphalt
glistened,
blacktop igneous
pavement glittering–
shimmering
in rigid obsidian.

Hidden within this vision
visits
solitude, unsolicited–
loneliness exhibited,
never fitting in;
island imprisonment
as bridges begin
quivering
above stygian rivers grim,
abysmal reflections glint,
swimming in viridian.

Water's
brim risen
to vertiginous limits
I see
flitting images
of cataclysmic collision
with frigidness
obliterating to oblivion.

A dismal wish
reminded by
a grisly glimpse
of figments vivid since
residual shiver imprints
from winter's winds
whipping shins
and thinning skin;
I cringe, wither, wince,
my eyelids squint–
but I still live, so
no longer motionless
my frostbitten digits grip,
limbs never given in
to blizzard's pins
or crystalline prisms–
I walk,
despite icy splinters
and misery digging in
my ambition wins.
This one took me at least a year to write, just took me a while to form it into something more cohesive (and im still not sure its as coherent of a narrative as i was aiming for 🤷‍♂️ lol)... still not quite satisfied with the ending but for now it just is what it is i suppose.

And because i use a rhyming dictionary and usually learn words/things as a result, here are some less commonly used words (to save anyone the time having to look them up)...

Visage (vizij) - 1. the surface of an object presented to view, 2. a person's ****** expression.
Stygian (stij-ee-uhn) -  of or relating to the river Styx.
Viridian (vr·i·dee·uhn) - a blueish green color.
Vertiginous (vur·tij·i·nuhs) - causing vertigo, especially by being extremely high or steep.
Andrew Crawford
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Andrew Crawford  31/M/Ohio
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