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Sep 27
I had this dream last night, I was floating endlessly, it was cold and dark. No one was there, it was so lonely, as I floated in the endless darkness. Floating and floating, on and on I went, never ceasing to drift. Till my body sunk, and I drown, in this self made dark abyss.
Plz critic, I want to get better, but plz be a little nice lol.
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Robert  24/M
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     Immortality and CJ Sutherland
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