Submit your work, meet writers and drop the ads. Become a member
Jun 20
Sometimes I touch upon
The rippled waves
And fresh salt smell.
Careless and free I swim
In the blue lagoons
Listening to the hum of a busy earth
That passes too fast around me.
Sometimes I feel the sun
Its warmth pricking against my skin
Reminding me to breathe spring in.
Rewrite with a new structure
Written by
Elle  35/F/Cotswolds
(35/F/Cotswolds)   
Please log in to view and add comments on poems