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Jamesb
Poems
Jan 25
Fell at the First
My horse was showing so much promise,
Fit and healthy,
Much loved and admired
Fresh fed and groomed to a shine,
But a shiny coat and tack doesn't matter much,
What goes on the track counts more,
Amidst the thundering hooves
The sweat and flying turf
It's the placing at the line
That counts,
And my horse?
She fell
At the first.
Horses eh?
#love
#horseflesh
#disappointment
#frustration
#hurt
Written by
Jamesb
58/M/London
(58/M/London)
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