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Speak of Rothko

by @EllisDiep

It’s a perfectly dreamy day to disappear The streets are quiet, and the sky’s cloudy No one’s around, but that doesn’t mean it’s empty There’s light in the air, just enough of it Concrete ground scrapes the bareness of feets A mirror pool reflects an image of self At least what appears to be a self Different but still very familiar Backlit by the grey clouds Pierced by this slender monolith Broken by these glassy ripples Dark silhouettes dance on black canvases The dry wind mimics them but stumbles through hair Who said anything about being outside? The ceiling filters light through a window Dim metallic light which hugs the body Into a feeling of half-closed eyelids and irreality There are human-sized holes in the walls next to the black paintings leading into dark deep caverns Where the air runs like stale sandpaper against the gums of my teeth And the animal scampering echos off invisible walls The blackness slurs its static noise A cold command forces obedience Look back at the holes. Look at how they change every time eyes blink Look through the shadows which curtains the door Look and tell them what you see L—
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Oct 13, 2021
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