Apr 2021
Yawning ocean current swallows
hollow bottles crushed for blasting
back to shore exquisite sparkles.
Grace that bears our abject sorrows
costs a change forever lasting:
birth again as broken marvels.
hollow bottles crushed for blasting
back to shore exquisite sparkles.
Grace that bears our abject sorrows
costs a change forever lasting:
birth again as broken marvels.
Written for Easter Sunday. Critique prompts:
Can you tell that the metaphor is about God’s grace?
Is the imagery confusing?
Can you tell that each line of the 1st stanza is meant to be a direct metaphor for its counterpart in the 2nd stanza?
Can you tell that the metaphor is about God’s grace?
Is the imagery confusing?
Can you tell that each line of the 1st stanza is meant to be a direct metaphor for its counterpart in the 2nd stanza?
