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Dr Peter Lim
Poems
Jan 2021
In Our Brokenness*
By the deserted beach we walked
not a single word we said
the weary sky had lost its early shine
it was there farewell you bade
in our hearts we knew in brokenness
what we desired we ne'er could have had
love-vows and pledges had short memories
those who love most the saddest tears they must shed
* inspired by a painting of a lonely beach. After Keats and Shelley
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Dr Peter Lim
M/Victoria, Australia
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