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Oct 2020
I see you, struggling, fighting, loosing
I see you aching, breaking, fading
I see you.

I feel you, hurting, sinking, vanishing
I feel you crashing, yearning, dying
I feel you.

I look at you and I see me,
Whose faint breaths echo.
I look at you and I see me,
Ready, set, and will at the meadow.
These were my first thoughts as my subconscious watched my body slowly pass through a near-death experience. I have had many different explanations of what I feltโ€ฆ but to me, it still lingers, slowly opening up!
Layal Charara
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Layal Charara  31/F/Dubai, United Arab Emirat
(31/F/Dubai, United Arab Emirat)   
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