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A Dream or Reality,

When a myriad of shooting stars sparkled bright,

sped by in a glittering display, one Autumnal night,

they quickly traversed - as is their universal right,

to the Milky Way, I was overtaken with delight!

Being warmly wrapped - for the night was cool,

wearing a heavy old coat, that was lined with wool,

I was snugly warm. Dozing off, I began to dream,

where in my stargazing reverie, a beckoning beam

from a passing comet heading out into space,

beckoned me on a journey to a far distant place.

One where I’d visit worlds - in galactic profusion.

At this, in the midst of my kaleidoscopic confusion,

it seemed my dream became transformed into reality,

as planets and stars in great numbers, sped by me.

Though I knew not how to tell, one planet from the other,

I suddenly saw one passing, that was earth’s twin brother!

It was seen a speeding planet, flying by in blurred haste,

but from what I could see, it looked a lifeless, waste!

Even today, I can clearly recall my dream as I write,

and shudder at the sight of that lifeless, barren sight,

for it was the bleakest landscape I have ever seen!

Heaven forbid it was a sign, that earth’s verdant green,

will be looking like this, unless we change our ways,

and end the senseless spoiling, that’s rife these days.

If not, soon our unique oasis, could drift in lifeless state

a victim of the same perceived, barren apathetic fate

that has befallen every single planet known to man.

Today, we should appreciate the pleasures we can

enjoy today. Often taken for granted by you and me.

As for my dream? May it never become stark reality!

 

Rhymer September 25th, 2020.

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Written by
denis-barter
Canadian
Published
Sep 25, 2020
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With all the wild fires - both here in North America and greater still, in Siberia, one has to wonder on what our space adventurers report when they get a 'close-up' of the stars and planets we see from a distance. Great food for thought! Denis.

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