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Jul 2020
The gold of her ring
The silver of her hair
The cries of her children
Nothing stopped him from hurting her
She didn't complain
when the light of the world left her
in complete darkness
Loneliness consumed her
This world gave her back
for all that she did
till the last moment
before she lost her breath to death
TRY READING IT FROM LAST LINE TO FIRST LINE AND SEE IF IT STILL MAKES SENSE.
I NOT GONNA SAY WHAT ITS ABOUT SINCE I WANNA KNOW WHAT YOU GUYS THINK ABOUT THIS . ITS OPEN TO INTERPRETATIONS .
Alphy
Written by
Alphy  23/F/India
(23/F/India)   
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