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Nigdaw
Poems
Sep 2019
Commute
Black rain falls
ice cold
emotionless
desolate tarmac roads
puddles of ugliness form
devouring light
drawing in the world
dark matter
the abyss lies beyond
headlight's reach
reflected buildings distort
as cars spin
aquaplaning tyres
across mirrored
mercurial surfaces
downdraught suppresses
exhaust fumes
as dragon automobiles
slither their hissing way
neon lit fire breathing
monsters of road and byway
home is measured
by the length of the next queue
rather than miles per hour
#journey
#commute
#home
#travel
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