Dimmer and cloudy, the blue skies go Cooler and faster, the winter winds blow Icy rain soon begins to flow Thunder roars throughout the heavens Lightning strikes upon the Earth The ferocious storm outside rapidly grows And the one within is kept at bay By the frosted heart that dwells in my chest Constantly beating but never sways The chill creeps in, numbing my fingers and toes Soon grasping me saying it’ll never let go It’s grip ever tight I twist and twirl, shiver and curl My energy drained, I struggled in vain I yield the will, my volition to fight Surely but surely the dreams drags me in Afloat on an icy ocean, without a soul in sight The cold seeps in and my body froze The weight drags me under, beneath the glossy ice That reflected the starry moonlight sky One by one, the stars flew away Bubble by bubble my breath drifted away. My mind commenced to sway As the light initiated to fade Fenced by darkness, enclosed by cold. I begin to loose my way. Should I awake or should I stay. Its not much of a difference anyways
Plz tell me on what I should improve on, this is my first ever poem