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Jan 2013
I want to create something new
           from dust and ashes.
A masterpiece never before seen
            not a copycat idea.

Everyone dreams of greatness
            to be the best in a field.
But there isn't room for more
             not every star shines the same.

There are the natural ones
            Already shining
                    Bright.
Those that you have to peer
     Into the sky for a while.
   Lose yourself in thoughts
Find your hopes and dreams
see where you are meant to be.

Every new creation and idea
Was there in the beginning
                  Smaller
            Insignificant
  but existent in it's capacity .
   It's watered and nurtured
Like a new born babe prepared
for the life the parents want.
  Better than what they had.
  Children are a way of living
Life in a newer more creative way.
Supposed to submit a poem on the theme innovation.  Came up with this.  Feedback please!
Does it fit theme and is it any good?
HELP! !!
Mia
Written by
Mia  F/Paris
(F/Paris)   
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   Pure LOVE, Marian and DieingEmbers
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