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KateKarl
Poems
Jan 2019
Modernist
The contemporaries show the world at it’s best as a panoramic pane of glass,
Clad in bloodless steel.
But it has never looked more a forbidden garden than between prison-bar windows,
My view is the sweetest fruit.
And I wouldn’t take the modern architecture because what now looks like paradise,
Is probably a parking lot.
For a creative writing assignment. Any and all criticism, constructive or cruel, is appreciated!
#modern
#architecture
#garden
#paradise
#ignorance
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