So they say nothing can compare to the delicacies that claim our sky. High above, far beyond our air, lights break the darkness.
I must admit to their magnificence; truly breathtaking. Is it such a coincidence, that your presence has similar effects on me?
I watch their genuine glow, and wish you were there beside me; to share in this wonder. To gain the experience of true sublimity.
I know that if you were really there with me, my gaze would fall. No longer focusing on the sky, but instead upon your all.
And because these moments don't last forever- I know I could watch these stars whenever. But it wouldn't be us, together- I would take it all in.
An amazing experience it is; the feeling of being close, to the one thing I've found that surpasses the stars I've seen, in both amazement and in beauty
My attempt to match the structure with the context. The wording was a little tricky because I had it written before I decided to shape it and then, when in the process of shaping, I needed to make a few adjustments.