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Oct 2012
Breath in with me,  s l o w l y
The richness from the air
This damp stillness I've kept
This alabaster jar

Rank with the whisky-smell of rambling words
Or the leather aroma of
The most tactful stimulation

Let's not rob this moment with words

Your blue, wide eyes tell me enough
And your lavender (I'll imagine) scent
Cues to me your appreciation

That breaks the ruckus with stunning silence
And air full to excess with
Spice of vehement delight
Just a wish...  

Improvements? Comments? All are appreciated.
Cary  Fosback
Written by
Cary Fosback  Albany, NY, USA
(Albany, NY, USA)   
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