a high highjumper stumbled over the curb flat! zero points for that!
[senryu] SøułSurvivør (C) 7/2/2017
Haiku is 5/7/5 and is about the natural world.
Senryu is 5/7/5 about human nature and foibles. Especially regarding their irony.
I looked them both up. These are, of course, classic rules. They are broken by American haiku/senryu
But the rules of Haiku - natural world Senryu - human nature still apply. Just sayin'.
My father's much better. They gave him antibiotics so his fever is down & he's not hallucinating as much. Thanks to all who cared enough to wish him well. Prayers and good thoughts still appreciated!