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Apr 2017
Felt like moon falling and sun rising

Your voice so sweet induced my senses
Clearing it with a gold garden of your silver linings
Eyes glowing with red hope and flames of love
You hypnotized my retina
As the sky in your eye became blue
Always full of courage and might like goldilocks
You became a tale I'd like to tell my offspring's about before they go to sleep

Felt like moon falling and sun rising

You had a powerful attraction on me more than what a magnetic field could ever attract
In your palms you held my hand
the heart rate increased
the pulse was the indecisive reaction
Our hearts attached as time stopped for a millisecond
Stars were dancing as the moon watched
Robots red resembling love

Felt like moon falling and sun rising

As you placed your arms around me
Arousingly with shades of grey made darker
your warmth meant more than a kingdom
turned my blacked out heart into a lighthouse
Opening my eyes to you felt like paradise on planet earth


So worthwhile I'm just glad I didn't die before I met you
The Love Religion...
McDonald tsiie
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