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Dues Ode

Should love spring also with Spring!?

Here birds and herds art all so whisp'ring;

O all recall the bliss that thee Bliss brings!

Dale and combe, do entertain, o'erdue regales;

Sweet pipings piped twain boon nightingales;

Here a throng hears; here a throng sings.

A-strutting didst he; a ditzy strutter e'er go.

Gone so long•each to each•  is each woe,

O what if ten -steal gentle, O Woodruff!?

What if ten by hundred do so flee to steal away,

Lest the sadness's of Winter's existence thee allay,

SO would an woodland rill still rill all it could've?

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Written by
jamie-l-cantore
Published
Jan 10, 2017
Lines·Words
12·97
Notes

Class: Irregular Ode

Tone: Positive with a tinge of Negatives

The Argument: Questioning if looking for Love in the brightest of places; "Nature" in the best of times, with the worst of Luck is a good idea. Woodruff is a type of plant, but also the name of the Protagonists dog

Double entendres throughout/ Wordplay in Title, and in the phrases, especially the phrases italicized such as: "Steal Gentle"(quietly sneak off or leave; or if you prefer dark Poetry it could mean die without a fight, "second meaning inspired by "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night" by Dylan Thomas ) & "Woodruff"  "Steel" being opposite of "Wood" and "Gentle" being opposite of  "Rough" /Selfsame Word Pairs also present

Check out the Capital letters on the left: Shod **** Owls

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