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dear dad

do you see my hands?

my long fingers, a little bony, sometimes they hurt

they tell me i have an artist's hands

she was an artist, too

 

do you see my shoulders?

freckled from the sun,

just like hers were

 

do you see my collar bone?

it's very pronounced

maybe not as much as hers, though, toward the end

 

do you see me walking?

my legs are long and my hips are wide,

and my waist is small and my smile is big

just like mom

 

 

do you see me?

or do you only see her?

i'm still here

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valerie-brooke
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Dec 15, 2016
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