I sit alone at night Under the whispering rays of moonlight A bottle in one and in the other, a picture of you It took you 3 years to notice That my mask was fading, and my tears were growing You asked "Are you okay?" But there is no emotion in the words you said I am fine "but you were crying" Crying? No, I cannot cry They are not tears They are just my emotions The ones that have been falling for years
To All Reader: I ask of you to give me you critiques on my poems. I want to become a better poet, and i need to know what i need to work on.