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Surrogate

by Smit

She kissed him In the light, she nim He stood, still He couldn’t move, without her will He stared In those blue eyes, he dared Though he fall Gave up to her, all Cause she was surrogate Maybe right now she came, but she was late Cause he kissed, her not He was fucked up, was hot Cause he loved, her not Maybe someone else, she fought Cause she was surrogate You know, it was her fate And he gave up, he was weak And she came up, to sneak Someone’s shadow, fill it all She couldn’t, she was a doll Cause she was surrogate And she loved him, no hate 19:24 19 September 2016
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Written by
Smit
17 / F
Published
Nov 2, 2016
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#love#sad#life#hate#dark#obsession#jealous#sadistic#possessive#obsess
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