I laid my heart out bare I put my soul out for you But when you didn't notice I said I was fine But I'm not ******* OK That would be a joke if you think I was I put my soul on the line for you And you didn't give a **** You sit there thinking everything is OK But it's not and you know it But things will never go my way So you sit there smiling, without a clue You're at the top of the cliff And I'm falling for you But you don't care I'm just a stupid girl Someone that goes unnoticed But you don't have to care or listen right? You don't have to give a **** ........right? .....well maybe you should I think you should open your eyes sometime..... And give a ****...
To All Reader: I ask of you to give me you critiques on my poems. I want to become a better poet, and i need to know what i need to work on.