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There Will Be A Quiz After......

I write this opening line

Such that you will understand the overarching theme

I am disorganized

I am rattling around in a cage within myself

And I don’t want to come out

 

Listen to the way I communicate

I have fleeting visions

By the time I finish this thought

There is a new beginning

Washing away everything there was before

 

It is a constant river of thoughts and thoughts about thoughts

That think themselves about themselves

Down the water toward the ocean

Thoughts can only be thoughts

I am rambling you are listening

Take notice of me

 

Watch me try and traverse this vast stream of consciousness

I cannot reach the shore and if I did it would be disastrous

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Written by
walker-marema
Published
Sep 1, 2016
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19·122
Tags
#water#introspection#consciousness#ranting#self-worth
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