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Jun 2016
We can't change our fate? Our destinies are set?

Who was the one to determine this? The one who now brings so much inescapable sorrow.

How do I comfort my girlfriend, tears falling from her eyes, when nothing I do can change the outcome?

I guess sometimes we're stuck with our lot in life. No sense in trying to change it, right?

Maybe so, but seeing those glimmering tears fall from her eyes I shall not accept this. I shall change the outcome and make the world a better place.

I know I can't fix everything and I know I can't save everyone, but **** please let me save her.
2 things I want to say.
First this is a draft and I welcome any constructive criticism or any constructive complements which are rare.
Second, don't you just hate it when the only solution in sight seems like it would only make things worse? Like it would cause more trouble? I want to make this better but I don't know if I can.
Ryan Hoysan
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Ryan Hoysan  25/M/Bethlehem, Pa
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