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Smoking and Sitting on the Ring Around Saturn

by chemicalkid

And then we had awkward first time sex on the floor next to your bed and I promised I wouldn't stop loving you no matter how far you get And I'm as bad as breaking promises as you're as good as breaking hearts so I guess that makes one of us fucked I keep crying over all the stupid things we let ruin us and how fucking stupid we were to think distance wouldn't fuck us up everything you do fucks me up you hate to see me cry but can't help but love to be the reason and I'm always happy for you but I hate to see you leaving
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chemicalkid
Published
Apr 24, 2016
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I wrote this when I realized I spent eight months fighting with someone over every little thing and not speaking to him and ignoring the fact that very soon he'd be leaving and how I wish I had a better grasp on the concept of time.

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#love#heartbreak#sex#long-distance
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