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The first concert

To experience a concert is unlike anything else

The roar of the crowd only matched by the boom of the music.

My mom, my protector, in the sea of raging people.

The music taking control of each and everyone of them.

She and her friends surrounding me,

Creating a wall between a little girl and the sea.

 

I do not remember exactly what was being played,

Or what was said.

But I will not forget the overwhelming feeling of awe,

As I watched my idol sang his heart out.

 

If you look years into the future,

You would find that same girl all grown up now,

Right by the stage at a concert.

My friends and I, we are now the protectors.

Keeping my sister shielded from the sea.

As she experiences for the first time,

The roar of the crowd, the boom of the music.

As she stands in awe,

Listening so closely as the band plays.

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Written by
EllaRose
Published
Sep 14, 2015
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something i had to write for my creative writing class

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#music#sisters#concert
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