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Aug 2015
Remember, when you said that you wanted to die?
Because of those countless accusations regarding your lies
I told you to stand up, live, just give it a try
But you still keep on asking me all your thousand whys
I'm speechless, unable to answer because of the thought I'm not wise
I punched my stomach, cause of anxiety, wanting to **** the butterflies
I still showed care towards you even my emotions were on disguise
You hugged me and whispered, "I'm HOPELESS" then you cried
I was there, I've swept the tears beneath your eyes
"I'm here for you and I will stand up for you" I replied
Slowly, our lips collide and they began to dramatize
This memory was just a proof that my efforts aren't denied
A precious moment of victory from suicide, because you SURVIVE!
Inspired by a movie. I put myself into the perspective of the boy who encourages the girl to keep moving forward and not to end her precious life. It's just awesome how sweet words can stop a person from committing suicide. Like words of encouragement and motivation. By the way, this isn't a love story. Sorry, hehe. Hope you enjoy my poems, more poems this coming September.

Just correct my grammar

Aug.22/2015
tian
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tian  M/Philippines
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