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May 2015
The Harshest Critic you could ever meet is yourself
when I have money I always don't have enough
if I'm lonely it's my fault I haven't lived enough to know lust from love
I always critique myself harshly because I know my potential is in the stars.

But maybe I'm too ******* myself,
well what would you want a soft man's mental health?! learn to hide your feelings and release them onto the page!
I did that brain, now the more I write sometimes the worse I feel and the less I heal.

but you need me to put this into perspective because you're opinion on what I do isn't subjective you're not aggressive enough you'll fall to the ground like Dust

SHUT UP! I CAN'T TAKE YOU ANYMORE! I TRY NOT TO OVERTHINK EVERYTHING BUT YOU ******* ME FASTER THAN A 20 DOLLAR WXORE!
NeroameeAlucard
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NeroameeAlucard  Chicago Illinois
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