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Apr 2015
I don't even own a picture of yours,
to see you with  my deepest insticts.
And not even your voice to hear you,
for you break the silence of my soul.
Even silences have secrets, you say.
But I can't see it neithher feel nor hear it.

I didn't even see you from years
'cause you left for a town indistinct.
But distance makes us want to be close,
to find, to cheer. Distance makes our love
stronger than it was from ever.
But somewhere deep inside, I 'm afraid.

I didn'y even know you good,
when you left for your place.
You loved me then, though
I didn't understand and you left.
I should've loved you sooner
and for it, I apologize my dear.

I don't even care about what
you do to make me jealous.
I really don't mind when you flirt.
Although you're far off from me
thanks to technology at most.
'Cause we can get hold of us.

Even we're silent, distant and numb,
**I know you do love me
and I do it more than you do.
I know it's not a proper poem and has a lot of mistakes. Feedback needed again, actually I want a critic to say where am I wrong. Please say me if you like it! :) I'm learning to write.

Poem dedicated to **Shirley Holmes**
A Purple Moon
Written by
A Purple Moon  18/M/India
(18/M/India)   
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   NuBlaccSoul and Cecil Miller
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