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Lyle Jun 21
first of all, lets appreciate the wordplay
on your names
That alone makes me smile
second of all, lets adore these three
thirteen year olds
who took the time
to make me smile
to pick me up when I was down
who reminded me I'm not a failure
no matter what my family thinks
Only thirteen, yet so incredibly wise
if only I could acquire their level of kindess
These three worked together
yet separately,
to make sure I was okay
to cheer me up
and to make me feel less alone
And for that, I can never thank them enough.
Thank you Elena, for your beautiful poem and relating words.
Thank you Eliana, for your wonderful poem, and your kindness.
Thank you Liana, for always being there for me when I need you.
Reminder: you may be thirteen, but you are wise beyond your words,
wise beyond your years
and kind beyond your responsibility.
I love you all
Thank you.
Shoutout to these three wonderful HP users, please please go check out their work. I promise, you will not be disappointed at all.
  Jun 21 Lyle
eliana
There will be dark days,
when you feel alone
with your aching heart
but that doesn’t mean
you will always be.
The sun will always
peer through the clouds.
Let its light show you
the love you have forgotten.
to lyle, ive seen that you seem down by ur poems so may this help and to anybody else who needs it! đź’—
  Jun 21 Lyle
Elena Rosi
Oh you’re disappointing!
You’re to blame!
You’re a failure,
what a shame!

A little secret though,
Is that you’re not.
A big secret is that
you don’t know.

You’re amazing
You’re brilliant,
Yes, I’m praising
You.
You the failure
You the crap.
You the human
You the light.

You made a mistake,
Like we all do.
It may feel too late,
But no, not for you.

Fix you’re wrongs, get up
Because you’re only a failure
when you give up.
So cheer up, smile.
Would you, Lyle? I’m  Writing this for you and for who needs it, hope I helped.
Lyle Jun 20
I've failed
in more ways then one
failed a test
failed a friend
failed at life
fail
fail
fail
I'm a failure
can't do anything right
Lyle Jun 20
dig
fingernails dig
into my skin
just to feel
something
my brain is overwhelmed
too much at once
fingernails dig
into my skin
trying to tell myself
to take a breath
but I can't
and my fingernails
cause blood
Lyle Jun 20
shame
disappointment
I'm
A
Failure
heat crawls under my skin
stabbed my eyes
until I cried
screaming won't change
the fact I'm a failure
believe me
no one is more disappointed in me
then me
  Jun 19 Lyle
lizie
i like the way the sun prickles my skin.
like it’s noticing me,
saying my name in heat.
i lie there and take it,
grateful to be wanted
by something so distant.

it burns slowly,
soft as a lullaby,
and i tell myself it’s warmth,
not warning.

i lie still,
my body blooming into color
like a secret i forgot to hide.
no one sees it.
but i’ll feel it later.

just like always.
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