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Fenix Flight Jun 2014
Kneel before me
your mistress, your goddess.
I am your mistress
you are my ***** little slave
You exist only to please me.
And please me you will
Please me you shall.
Fenix Flight Jun 2014
let the pain
drip down like rain
splash into puddles
of raw misery
Ok people tell me what you really think of this.
It just popped into my head and Idk I kind of like it
But I want your guys input on it
Fenix Flight Jun 2014
You
Are
Important
Someone
Cares
About
You

Just thought I'd let you know
Fenix Flight Jun 2014
In the dictionary
the definition of amazing is:
To fill with wonder.
To astound.

My definition is:
How your eyes
are brighter then
all the stars in the sky.

When you lite up
a room with
your dazzling smile.
And take my breath away.

How your laugh
sounds like
a thousand angels
singing from heaven.

How you make me
feel special without
even meaning to
just by being you.

My definition of amazing is:
Everything that makes up,
you
Wrote this a long time ago.
Fenix Flight Jun 2014
My body is drained
my body is screaming pain
Head
side
knee
ankle
throat
tungue
wrist
ear

this dizzy feeling
it wont lift.
My vision blackening
as the dizzy spell hits

fatigue is closing in.
My eyelids fighting
to stay open.
Losing with each passing minute.

My stomach churning
turning against itself.
threatening to spill its contents.

tears leak out
streaming down my face.
my anxeity shot through
My poor body is worn out.
its needs a break.
it needs a rest.
******
why
can
I
just
get
a
break?
  Jun 2014 Fenix Flight
Hawk Flight
So I see that my poems have started trending. And according to my friend it has to do with the people that follow me.
And as of this moment I have 15 followers (6/3/2014). Cool. So I guess thanks are in order for all of you

1.Sierra Leone  - You were my first follower on here so thank you I apprecaite it.

2. Ranger - You were my second follower. and you are a friend on my "little sister". thanks for the follow

3. Fenix Flight - I am surprised you werent my first follower. BUt regardless, you are the reason I am even on this site so thank you sis.

4. Summer Skye - My fourth and lucky follower. the sister of my "sister" thanks little LF, I am grateful you gave me the honor of being followed by you.

5. Zero Zaneh  - Fifth follower, Thank you man. your work is good.

6. Stace  - sixth follower. we never talk or whatnot, but your work is really good.

7.  IJ Keddie -  seventh follower, thank you. your work is interesting. I like it.

8. Beryldov Lew - eighth follower, thank you. every follow means something to me

9. ᏰέƦẙḽԃṏሁ Լέῳ -  ninth follower. I do not understand your name but i like the work you put up

10. That Asian Josh - tenth follower. (dont take this the wrong way but) We asains must stick together right?. your work is intersting. I enjoy reading it

11. POETIC T - eleventh follower. Marvel? **** yeah man. keep up the cool work

12. Namir- twelvth follower (i cant spell for ****) Dude really it took you this long to follow me -.-. come on, but thanks for it anyway. your work is intense.

13 ISverre G Holter  thirteenth follower. your work is cool. I like it. keep it up

14.PrttyBrd- Fourteenth follower, you started following me last night (6/2/14)  after my poem Life started trending. thank you

15.Nanna Harrow -fifteenth follower, last but not least. you as well started following me last night after my poem Life started trending. thanks for the boost of confedence


There you have it folks. all the people who on here think I am worth something to follow. thanks to each and everyone of you.
sorry for any mispelling. I am half asleep writting all this
and I dont really know how to express my emotions so if it sounds stiff and rude I apologize. I realy do apprecaite all of you. I thought my work was crap. but I guess it isnt. you guys show that.
Fenix Flight Jun 2014
I shake my head at you
Your eagerness is charming
Your willingness overpowering

You're much to eager
to jump in this world
Like a child cannon balling
into the Pool
creating ripples
whereever he goes

Your much to willinging
to participate
but you must walk
before you can run
so you don't trip and fall  

Don't stumble on these words
that float easily to your head
Take a breath
Stand back for a few
and reevaluate

simplicity is a good thing
to much can ruin

don't think me scolding
don't think me cruel
I'm just tryng to help you
one writer
too another.
I wrote this to a fellow poet who had just started writing
and thought he knew EVERYTHING about writing
he was leaving cruel and unhelpful comments on other writters works.
(not on this website dont worry)
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