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Midnight flare Aug 2019
Dimmer and cloudy, the blue skies go
Cooler and faster, the winter winds blow
Icy rain soon begins to flow
Thunder roars throughout the heavens
Lightning strikes upon the Earth
The ferocious storm outside rapidly grows
And the one within is kept at bay
By the frosted heart that dwells in my chest
Constantly beating but never sways
The chill creeps in, numbing my fingers and toes
Soon grasping me saying it’ll never let go
It’s grip ever tight
I twist and twirl, shiver and curl
My energy drained, I struggled in vain
I yield the will, my volition to fight
Surely but surely the dreams drags me in
Afloat on an icy ocean, without a soul in sight
The cold seeps in and my body  froze
The weight drags me under, beneath the glossy ice
That reflected the starry moonlight sky
One by one, the stars flew away
Bubble by bubble my breath drifted away.
My mind commenced to sway
As the light initiated to fade
Fenced by darkness, enclosed by cold.
I begin to loose my way.
Should I awake or should I stay.
Its not much of a difference anyways
Plz tell me on what I should improve on, this is my first ever poem

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