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leeshez

leeshez

American I just want thoughtful feed back on my poems, its hard to do revision without it.

things will life sun eyes cold time love find feel night white face sure lips water dark tired smoke light dreams man days rain head heart hands red thing shit filled perfect morning sweet air hand better good open mind day teeth dream full golden car fuck write blood broken fire sleep body drunken ground slow set death people darkness warm truth reason place wrapped cigarette existence close lonely sky memories moon sweat lights hell heavy god sad lie looked black trees hours romeo purpose real lost clown soft heat hear smell smile entire leave small blue wanted breathe room sense hard keep silent kind speak left human wet fucking poem step innocence lies long happy panting clouds streets told men leaves hold turn lay course covered safe kiss front swaying house fish imagine care second talking nights dog going hope watch bad smiling asked walk slowly drink person thinking