The_Definition_Of_Amateur - Hello Poetry

The_Definition_Of_Amateur

The_Definition_Of_Amateur

19/F amateur poet in need of some constructive criticism

sweet night kitten face nose find head good state sky sleeping arms sleep earth lap hands soft birds loudly grief bone hot borders rights ground rest walk summer frothy ode fur cold young dusty sing rain garden open months will throne fragile lives write started plumage love thoughts heart baby fill children sound mouth tall age profanity restful heads stay bush tenderly cat adore cement emptiness amusement voices tired tugging sways coldest drive whip menagerie overhear beam paradox bubbling scarred add mice jesters bound coats freckled heavy harvest ballad smeared despite houses pallbearer trill willow melts mind music efforts bluberry car opposite gilded welcomes rubies wrinkled scream paws dressed tattered frolic rally beauty straining devoured bones greedy tenderness soul shoreline backyard lizards cheeks patter smiles spew shadows touch dare powdered tells mouser gale pines careful tears foam feet glances journey pink mortality simple youth countless flick nostril loving admiration childhood