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YoungGentleman17 Apr 2014
Rather you love me or hate me
I'm bound to be strong
I lived by the rules 17 years long
Sometimes I watch the life of others and compare it to mines
I guarantee you at those times
I'm outshined
I'm very smart tho I'm not passing
Reason why is to many struggles been clashing
Things get more worse than better
Its so crazy,
Mane I know a lot people wouldn't care
That's the reason why I ll tell ya life ain't fair
I know people from way back who don't speak to me now
Looking over it all
All I can say is wow
But I'm happy to see most o of them doing great
Tho there's others like me that's still in the chase
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
I'm paranoid to wonder when life will end
Will I die alone
Or with family and friends
Is there a chance I ll see the day I ll become a man
Or be tooking away by the lords hands

I'm paranoid to see the Ghost
To become possessed is what I fear the most
I wonder if I ll find my mate
I'm paranoid to see my true fate

I'm paranoid to see true history
Though I wonder why our nations are in misery
At lease were in peace
Instead of war
But when peace has been released
That's when Im paranoid even more

My brother be in And out them streets
I'm paranoid one dat he ll be badly beat
I live a life that's full of drama
Ask karma
Or dharma
Why I'm so paranoid of the disease in my momma

These are the things that put me to tears
And are my biggest fears
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
Hello to all poeotry Writers
I welcome you all to this imaginary place
Come join us all and let your thoughts erase
my name is louis tennessee is my state memphis is my town
I can never go a day without writing something down
But I made a lot of poems and imma have fame
See growing up as me you never heard you name

If u show me live I ll show it back
Then maybe my page wilk be packed
To all poem writers your all my family
Not only because we all do the same thing
Pardon me
I just wanna see how respect this poem me
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
You played me
After all I done
After the money I sent away for you
Did something that your own family wouldn't help you do
And what I get in return
You cuddling with another man
After him hiself said yall were friends
You make out with this guy as well
Mane you both can burn in hell

How could you say you want a guy who nice
And dat guy ain't even right
He got a felony but you still let him in right
I'm hurt inside but you don't know
At least god let the real in you show
Tell me what can he do for you
Without a job
Car and even house
And don't bother tell me what this really about

This situation has put me in rage
She's only 15 and he's 19 in age
Dude your a ******
And it makes her a ****
I don't even wanna be your friend nomore
Telling me you might fall asleep
When I know you lyin
Your gonna sleep with this man
Thinking I'm stupid
If he's what you really want,
He can be your cupid
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
It takes a real man to treat a lady right
You give her love
Affection Attension
Pleasure you do these things
And your bound to be together
Forever

You know she's real when she breaks her back to be in your life
Thats the type of girl I ll be dying to make my wife
A lot of people don't know ehat the power of love can do
But I see a lot of power I as look into you

This woman's work,
Can make a man fall to his knees
Begging her that's she's the answer to his needs
you know she's special when you start to cope
Living a day of love and infinite hope

This woman's work,
Can bring the nation close
Her work can  put a end to crime
This woman was made to shine
And I'm hoping at the end,
This kind of woman will be mine's
This is my poem version of the real song
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
Tonights a night I'm hoping you can handle
As we lay naked in covers,
Surrounded around dim candles
Let us come closer until we become hot
Then I ll caress your body as I find your spots
We have music playing in the back,
Whipped cream in my hands
The things I'm finna do is your minds demand

The lights are dim
The lights are low
I hear you calling my name
As I kiss your body slow
I feel a sense of your treasure
Your hands are bringing extra pressure,
As you reveal your true pleasure

How about a 68 to make things fair
Or you can 69 me as I sit in this chair
I hope you'll remain gentle
No need to be tough
As time goes by things become rough
Her hands are behind her back while she's kneeled on the ground
Then I stroke her body till I flip her around

As were both are laid I stroke inside
As I **** her breast
Just wanna show you my love at its best
And put my skills to test
You've stolen my virginity,
This must be a crime
Because we both are in this bedroom serving our time
But listen the story only gets better
Stayed tuned cause it just gets wetter
YoungGentleman17 Mar 2014
I hate to see you face so much
You gotta deal with people
Plus today you were beat an d *****
I know that's to hard to forget and escape

If I was in your city with you
I ll always keep you safe
Cause I guess my feelings have been tooken over by your grace

I hate the fact no justice has been done
So right now your in a battle that's not even won
How could your brother allow them to do what they did
I guess he didn't know what to expect
So tell me how should give him respect

Its bad enough you deal with diabetes
You deal with stress
And this has added on to the rest
So I know your feeling a mess
But hope one day you ll be at your best
So may God bless
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