Noticeing poems on Hello Poetry

John Paco Casillas Jan 2014

yo, Listen to the story ima tell way back wen i saw this bad chick and she casted a spell right, I was chillen with the crew yeah u now my ****** we were rocking some snapbacks and the clippers I was checking her out I saw her face yeah u now lovey lovey dovey all up in my space my boys was sayin she's a seven she a nine in my mind i thought she's a dime so i was checking her out straight up and down i notice her just noticeing me she was rocking some J's with a short mini skirt she had the Jordan symbol on a v cut shirt i pulled up right next to her we was chitin chattin for a lil bit exchange numbers told to call me in a lil bit the relationship was in full gear i just told her all that she wanted hear like she pretty and like your hair i don't wanna come across as thirst i just wanna **** and wanted to be her first wen she ask me if already had it i lied and told her yes try to look in her eys so she won't notice i was staring at her chest every time we kiss i take a deep breath she is feeling high cause I now what to do i bite her lips i kiss her neck grab her hips her body tight tying to set that mood right u now what I'm a do tonight started from the top worked my way down took her ******* off so i can see that view told I'm a do u right and eat it to told her I'm going make her feel brand new she said take it easy you now I'm new told her me too when I do what I'm a do when i get on top of you I'm a test your vocals out and you singing ooooooooh! girl you now it's nothing baby girl I'm not fronting was not lying when i said you are my first.

dennis drain Jul 2016

a poem for a kind women

I work hard every day, every 2 weeks i get paid
every house I paint, i work all day, for quality not just pay.
I rarely see the owners and those I do mostly wave.
I don't expect much, its just nice to here a thanks.
I've been a painter for 2 years and iv never gotten a tip
Iv never asked for one why would It be expected
when i got a small envelop as thanks i was excited.
I looked inside it and i couldn't believe my eyes
i can't express how much 60 dollors brightened my life.
you are of a few on earth who keep my hope for humanity alive
so thank you very much for noticeing our efforts
It helps to know that someone appreciates how hard we work

. sincerely,dennis

I was one of about 5 guys who worked for 3 weeks to paint a large house . I had to stay home today for a meeting but I work with my room mate and when he came home he had two envalopes he gave me mine it was a thank you with 60 dollars inside, it was the first time iv ever had a client go above and beyond to thank even myself. She on the other hand signed a card and placed a heafty tip inside. It is truly a refreshing change from all the greed we have now a'days

Bella Jan 2019

Dear Logan

Thank you!
You've done so much for me without even noticeing.
To you, I was probably just some girl you didn't want to be rude to,
and that's fine.
Because that's all I needed to be
for you to be what you were to me.

My first girl crush.
My first Butch bubble of an infatuation.
You were one of the best things that could have happened to me,
the first person who was what I wanted.
So all I can say to you is thank you.
Even if you'll never hear it.

Cj Jan 2019

We connect to internet

We connect to the internet
More than Humans
We connect to WiFi
More than loved ones
We connect phones to chargers
More than friends
We connect to AI more than our own species

All this technology is doing is making us lazy
Making us fat
And slowly killing us
Without anyone noticeing

We connect to each other online
More than in person
Peoples social skills going down
Because the only way people talk
Is through a box

Next thing you know
We’re all dead
But we don’t know
Because we won’t see it unless it’s on a screen

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