Does a dead man breath ?
Does not so ,I suppose.
But the dead man breaths .
Haunted by his past ,
Haunted by his future,
The dead man breaths.
Does a dead man breath?
Does not so, I suppose.
But the dead man breaths.
By not his actions ,
By actions of his sons.
By not his oaths ,
By oaths of his sons.
Does a dead man breath?
Does not so ,I suppose.
But the dead man breaths.
Holding everything he loved ,
Holding every speck ;with his love ,
He closed his eyes,
He closed his life.
Thus the dead man breathed.
I found a very interesting comment on a video
It said " A dead man breaths "
It led to a profound realisation that if a dead man to breathe
It to not by him but the duties he served in life
And through not by him but through what he created
So Ye I really just liked the comment and kinda tried to expand on it poetically
I think this is very different from my average poems
But hope you liked it nonetheless
