Dark sky the color of death
Hear the thunder shout!
A heavy storm ready to unfold
Brave is the soul of a raven
hacking the sage of the sky
to live or to die..
Hopeful, they gather around the tree
Pleading the storm to protect their home
Cruel angry storm
Raven's love is torn apart
Home sweet home is gone..
was given a challenge to shorten the poem I posted earlier to 60 words. What a challenging task.. I think its 61 words.