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Le Primtemps (“Spring” or “Springtime”) by Charles d’Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch Young lovers, greeting the spring fling themselves downhill, making cobblestones ring with their wild leaps and arcs, like ecstatic sparks drawn from coal. What is their brazen goal? They grab at whatever passes, so we can only hazard guesses. But they rear like prancing steeds raked by brilliant spurs of need, Young lovers. Original French text: Jeunes amoureux nouveaulx En la nouvelle saison, Par les rues, sans raison, Chevauchent, faisans les saulx. Et font saillir des carreaulx Le feu, comme de cherbon,      Jeunes amoureux nouveaulx. Je ne sçay se leurs travaulx Ilz emploient bien ou non, Mais piqués de l’esperon Sont autant que leurs chevaulx      Jeunes amoureux nouveaulx. The First Valentine Poem Charles d’Orleans (1394-1465), a French royal, the grandchild of Charles V, and the Duke of Orleans, has been credited with writing the first Valentine card, in the form of a poem for his wife. Charles wrote the poem in 1415 at age 21, in the first year of his captivity while being held prisoner in the Tower of London after having been captured by the British at the Battle of Agincourt. My Very Gentle Valentine by Charles d’Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch My very gentle Valentine, Alas, for me you were born too soon, As I was born too late for you! May God forgive my jailer Who has kept me from you this entire year. I am sick without your love, my dear, My very gentle Valentine. Ballade: Oft in My Thought by Charles d'Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch So often in my busy mind I sought,     Around the advent of the fledgling year, For something pretty that I really ought     To give my lady dear;     But that sweet thought's been wrested from me, clear,         Since death, alas, has sealed her under clay     And robbed the world of all that's precious here—         God keep her soul, I can no better say. For me to keep my manner and my thought     Acceptable, as suits my age's hour? While proving that I never once forgot     Her worth? It tests my power!     I serve her now with masses and with prayer;         For it would be a shame for me to stray     Far from my faith, when my time's drawing near—         God keep her soul, I can no better say. Now earthly profits fail, since all is lost and the cost of everything became so dear; Therefore, O Lord, who rules the higher host,     Take my good deeds, as many as there are,     And crown her, Lord, above in your bright sphere,         As heaven's truest maid! And may I say:     Most good, most fair, most likely to bring cheer—         God keep her soul, I can no better say. When I praise her, or hear her praises raised, I recall how recently she brought me pleasure;     Then my heart floods like an overflowing bay And makes me wish to dress for my own bier—     God keep her soul, I can no better say. Rondel: Your Smiling Mouth by Charles d'Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch Your smiling mouth and laughing eyes, bright gray, Your ample ******* and slender arms’ twin chains, Your hands so smooth, each finger straight and plain, Your little feet—please, what more can I say? It is my fetish when you’re far away To muse on these and thus to soothe my pain— Your smiling mouth and laughing eyes, bright gray, Your ample ******* and slender arms’ twin chains. So would I beg you, if I only may, To see such sights as I before have seen, Because my fetish pleases me. Obscene? I’ll be obsessed until my dying day By your sweet smiling mouth and eyes, bright gray, Your ample ******* and slender arms’ twin chains! Confession of a Stolen Kiss by Charles d’Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch My ghostly father, I confess, First to God and then to you, That at a window (you know how) I stole a kiss of great sweetness, Which was done out of avidness— But it is done, not undone, now. My ghostly father, I confess, First to God and then to you. But I shall restore it, doubtless, Again, if it may be that I know how; And thus to God I make a vow, And always I ask forgiveness. My ghostly father, I confess, First to God and then to you. Translator note: By "ghostly father" I take Charles d’Orleans to be confessing to a priest. If so, it's ironic that the kiss was "stolen" at a window and the confession is being made at the window of a confession booth. But it also seems possible that Charles could be confessing to his human father, murdered in his youth and now a ghost. There is wicked humor in the poem, as Charles is apparently vowing to keep asking for forgiveness because he intends to keep stealing kisses at every opportunity! In My Imagined Book by Charles d’Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch In my imagined Book my heart endeavored to explain its history of grief, and pain, illuminated by the tears that welled to blur those well-loved years of former happiness's gains, in my imagined Book. Alas, where should the reader look beyond these drops of sweat, their stains, all the effort & pain it took & which I recorded night and day in my imagined Book? The next three poems are interpretations of "Le temps a laissé son manteau" ("The season has cast off his mantle"). This famous rondeau was set to music by Debussy in his Trois chansons de France. The season has cast its coat aside by Charles d'Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch The season has cast its coat aside of wind and cold and rain, to dress in embroidered light again: bright sunlight, fit for a bride! There isn't a bird or beast astride that fails to sing this sweet refrain: "The season has cast its coat aside!" Now rivers, fountains, springs and tides dressed in their summer best with silver beads impressed in a fine display now glide: the season has cast its coat aside! Winter has cast his cloak away by Charles d'Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch Winter has cast his cloak away of wind and cold and chilling rain to dress in embroidered light again: the light of day—bright, festive, gay! Each bird and beast, without delay, in its own tongue, sings this refrain: "Winter has cast his cloak away!" Brooks, fountains, rivers, streams at play, wear, with their summer livery, bright beads of silver jewelry. All the Earth has a new and fresh display: Winter has cast his cloak away! The year lays down his mantle cold by Charles d’Orleans (1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch The year lays down his mantle cold of wind, chill rain and bitter air, and now goes clad in clothes of gold of smiling suns and seasons fair, while birds and beasts of wood and fold now with each cry and song declare: "The year lays down his mantle cold!" All brooks, springs, rivers, seaward rolled, now pleasant summer livery wear with silver beads embroidered where the world puts off its raiment old. The year lays down his mantle cold. Fair Lady Without Peer by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Fair Lady, without peer, my plea, Is that your grace will pardon me, Since I implore, on bended knee. No longer can I, privately, Keep this from you: my deep distress, When only you can comfort me, For I consider you my only mistress. This powerful love demands, I fear, That I confess things openly, Since to your service I came here And my helpless eyes were forced to see Such beauty gods and angels cheer, Which brought me joy in such excess That I became your servant, gladly, For I consider you my only mistress. Please grant me this great gift most dear: to be your vassal, willingly. May it please you that, now, year by year, I shall serve you as my only Liege. I bend the knee here—true, sincere— Unfit to beg one royal kiss, Although none other offers cheer, For I consider you my only mistress. Chanson: Let Him Refrain from Loving, Who Can by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Let him refrain from loving, who can. I can no longer hover. I must become a lover. What will become of me, I know not. Although I’ve heard the distant thought that those who love all suffer, I must become a lover. I can no longer refrain. My heart must risk almost certain pain and trust in Beauty, however distraught. For if a man does not love, then what? Let him refrain from loving, who can. Chanson: The Summer's Heralds by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch The Summer’s heralds bring a dear Sweet season of soft-falling showers And carpet fields once brown and sere With lush green grasses and fresh flowers. Now over gleaming lawns appear The bright sun-dappled lengthening hours. The Summer’s heralds bring a dear Sweet season of soft-falling showers. Faint hearts once chained by sullen fear No longer shiver, tremble, cower. North winds no longer storm and glower. For winter has no business here. Her Beauty by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Her beauty, to the world so plain, Still intimately held my heart in thrall And so established her sole reign: She was, of Good, the cascading fountain. Thus of my Love, lost recently, I say, while weeping bitterly: “We cleave to this strange world in vain.” In ages past when angels fell The world grew darker with the stain Of their dear blood, then became hell While poets wept a tearful strain. Yet, to his dark and drear domain Death took his victims, piteously, So that we bards write bitterly: “We cleave to this strange world in vain.” Death comes to claim our angels, all, as well we know, and spares no pain. Over our pleasures, Death casts his pall, Then without joy we “living” remain. Death treats all Love with such disdain! What use is this world? For it seems to me, It has neither Love, nor Pity. Thus, “We cleave to this strange world in vain.” Traitorous Eye by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Traitorous eye, what’s new? What lewd pranks do you have in view? Without civil warning, you spy, And no one ever knows why! Who understands anything you do? You’re rash and crass in your boldness too, And your lewdness is hard to subdue. Change your crude ways, can’t you? Traitorous eye, what’s new? You should be beaten through and through With a stripling birch strap or two. Traitorous eye, what’s new? What lewd pranks do have you in view? Charles d’Orleans (1394-1465) was a French royal born into an aristocratic family: his grandfather was Charles V of France and his uncle was Charles VI. His father, Louis I, Duke of Orleans, was a patron of poets and artists. The poet Christine de Pizan dedicated poems to his mother, Valentina Visconti. He became the Duke of Orleans at age 13 after his father was murdered by John the Fearless, Duke of Burgundy. He was captured at age 21 in the battle of Agincourt and taken to England, where he remained a prisoner for the next quarter century. While imprisoned there he learned English and wrote poetry of a high order in his second language. A master of poetic forms, he wrote primarily ballades, chansons, complaints and rondeaux. He has been called the “father of French lyric poetry” and has also been credited with writing the first Valentine’s Day poem. Keywords/Tags: France, French, translation, Charles, Orleans, Duke, first Valentine, rondeau, chanson, rondel, roundel, ballade, ballad, lyric, Middle English, Medieval English, rondeaus, rondeaux, rondels, roundels, ballades, ballads, chansons, royal, noble, prisoner, hostage, ransom, Valentine
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Feb 27, 2020
Feb 27, 2020 at 11:33 PM UTC
Charles d'Orleans "Spring" translation
Le Primtemps (“Spring” or “Springtime”) by Charles d’Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch Young lovers, greeting the spring fling themselves downhill, making cobblestones ring with their wild leaps and arcs, like ecstatic sparks drawn from coal. What is their brazen goal? They grab at whatever passes, so we can only hazard guesses. But they rear like prancing steeds raked by brilliant spurs of need, Young lovers. Original French text: Jeunes amoureux nouveaulx En la nouvelle saison, Par les rues, sans raison, Chevauchent, faisans les saulx. Et font saillir des carreaulx Le feu, comme de cherbon,      Jeunes amoureux nouveaulx. Je ne sçay se leurs travaulx Ilz emploient bien ou non, Mais piqués de l’esperon Sont autant que leurs chevaulx      Jeunes amoureux nouveaulx. The First Valentine Poem Charles d’Orleans (1394-1465), a French royal, the grandchild of Charles V, and the Duke of Orleans, has been credited with writing the first Valentine card, in the form of a poem for his wife. Charles wrote the poem in 1415 at age 21, in the first year of his captivity while being held prisoner in the Tower of London after having been captured by the British at the Battle of Agincourt. My Very Gentle Valentine by Charles d’Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch My very gentle Valentine, Alas, for me you were born too soon, As I was born too late for you! May God forgive my jailer Who has kept me from you this entire year. I am sick without your love, my dear, My very gentle Valentine. Ballade: Oft in My Thought by Charles d'Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch So often in my busy mind I sought,     Around the advent of the fledgling year, For something pretty that I really ought     To give my lady dear;     But that sweet thought's been wrested from me, clear,         Since death, alas, has sealed her under clay     And robbed the world of all that's precious here—         God keep her soul, I can no better say. For me to keep my manner and my thought     Acceptable, as suits my age's hour? While proving that I never once forgot     Her worth? It tests my power!     I serve her now with masses and with prayer;         For it would be a shame for me to stray     Far from my faith, when my time's drawing near—         God keep her soul, I can no better say. Now earthly profits fail, since all is lost and the cost of everything became so dear; Therefore, O Lord, who rules the higher host,     Take my good deeds, as many as there are,     And crown her, Lord, above in your bright sphere,         As heaven's truest maid! And may I say:     Most good, most fair, most likely to bring cheer—         God keep her soul, I can no better say. When I praise her, or hear her praises raised, I recall how recently she brought me pleasure;     Then my heart floods like an overflowing bay And makes me wish to dress for my own bier—     God keep her soul, I can no better say. Rondel: Your Smiling Mouth by Charles d'Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch Your smiling mouth and laughing eyes, bright gray, Your ample ******* and slender arms’ twin chains, Your hands so smooth, each finger straight and plain, Your little feet—please, what more can I say? It is my fetish when you’re far away To muse on these and thus to soothe my pain— Your smiling mouth and laughing eyes, bright gray, Your ample ******* and slender arms’ twin chains. So would I beg you, if I only may, To see such sights as I before have seen, Because my fetish pleases me. Obscene? I’ll be obsessed until my dying day By your sweet smiling mouth and eyes, bright gray, Your ample ******* and slender arms’ twin chains! Confession of a Stolen Kiss by Charles d’Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch My ghostly father, I confess, First to God and then to you, That at a window (you know how) I stole a kiss of great sweetness, Which was done out of avidness— But it is done, not undone, now. My ghostly father, I confess, First to God and then to you. But I shall restore it, doubtless, Again, if it may be that I know how; And thus to God I make a vow, And always I ask forgiveness. My ghostly father, I confess, First to God and then to you. Translator note: By "ghostly father" I take Charles d’Orleans to be confessing to a priest. If so, it's ironic that the kiss was "stolen" at a window and the confession is being made at the window of a confession booth. But it also seems possible that Charles could be confessing to his human father, murdered in his youth and now a ghost. There is wicked humor in the poem, as Charles is apparently vowing to keep asking for forgiveness because he intends to keep stealing kisses at every opportunity! In My Imagined Book by Charles d’Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch In my imagined Book my heart endeavored to explain its history of grief, and pain, illuminated by the tears that welled to blur those well-loved years of former happiness's gains, in my imagined Book. Alas, where should the reader look beyond these drops of sweat, their stains, all the effort & pain it took & which I recorded night and day in my imagined Book? The next three poems are interpretations of "Le temps a laissé son manteau" ("The season has cast off his mantle"). This famous rondeau was set to music by Debussy in his Trois chansons de France. The season has cast its coat aside by Charles d'Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch The season has cast its coat aside of wind and cold and rain, to dress in embroidered light again: bright sunlight, fit for a bride! There isn't a bird or beast astride that fails to sing this sweet refrain: "The season has cast its coat aside!" Now rivers, fountains, springs and tides dressed in their summer best with silver beads impressed in a fine display now glide: the season has cast its coat aside! Winter has cast his cloak away by Charles d'Orleans (c. 1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch Winter has cast his cloak away of wind and cold and chilling rain to dress in embroidered light again: the light of day—bright, festive, gay! Each bird and beast, without delay, in its own tongue, sings this refrain: "Winter has cast his cloak away!" Brooks, fountains, rivers, streams at play, wear, with their summer livery, bright beads of silver jewelry. All the Earth has a new and fresh display: Winter has cast his cloak away! The year lays down his mantle cold by Charles d’Orleans (1394-1465) loose translation/interpretation/modernization by Michael R. Burch The year lays down his mantle cold of wind, chill rain and bitter air, and now goes clad in clothes of gold of smiling suns and seasons fair, while birds and beasts of wood and fold now with each cry and song declare: "The year lays down his mantle cold!" All brooks, springs, rivers, seaward rolled, now pleasant summer livery wear with silver beads embroidered where the world puts off its raiment old. The year lays down his mantle cold. Fair Lady Without Peer by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Fair Lady, without peer, my plea, Is that your grace will pardon me, Since I implore, on bended knee. No longer can I, privately, Keep this from you: my deep distress, When only you can comfort me, For I consider you my only mistress. This powerful love demands, I fear, That I confess things openly, Since to your service I came here And my helpless eyes were forced to see Such beauty gods and angels cheer, Which brought me joy in such excess That I became your servant, gladly, For I consider you my only mistress. Please grant me this great gift most dear: to be your vassal, willingly. May it please you that, now, year by year, I shall serve you as my only Liege. I bend the knee here—true, sincere— Unfit to beg one royal kiss, Although none other offers cheer, For I consider you my only mistress. Chanson: Let Him Refrain from Loving, Who Can by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Let him refrain from loving, who can. I can no longer hover. I must become a lover. What will become of me, I know not. Although I’ve heard the distant thought that those who love all suffer, I must become a lover. I can no longer refrain. My heart must risk almost certain pain and trust in Beauty, however distraught. For if a man does not love, then what? Let him refrain from loving, who can. Chanson: The Summer's Heralds by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch The Summer’s heralds bring a dear Sweet season of soft-falling showers And carpet fields once brown and sere With lush green grasses and fresh flowers. Now over gleaming lawns appear The bright sun-dappled lengthening hours. The Summer’s heralds bring a dear Sweet season of soft-falling showers. Faint hearts once chained by sullen fear No longer shiver, tremble, cower. North winds no longer storm and glower. For winter has no business here. Her Beauty by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Her beauty, to the world so plain, Still intimately held my heart in thrall And so established her sole reign: She was, of Good, the cascading fountain. Thus of my Love, lost recently, I say, while weeping bitterly: “We cleave to this strange world in vain.” In ages past when angels fell The world grew darker with the stain Of their dear blood, then became hell While poets wept a tearful strain. Yet, to his dark and drear domain Death took his victims, piteously, So that we bards write bitterly: “We cleave to this strange world in vain.” Death comes to claim our angels, all, as well we know, and spares no pain. Over our pleasures, Death casts his pall, Then without joy we “living” remain. Death treats all Love with such disdain! What use is this world? For it seems to me, It has neither Love, nor Pity. Thus, “We cleave to this strange world in vain.” Traitorous Eye by Charles d’Orleans loose translation/interpretation by Michael R. Burch Traitorous eye, what’s new? What lewd pranks do you have in view? Without civil warning, you spy, And no one ever knows why! Who understands anything you do? You’re rash and crass in your boldness too, And your lewdness is hard to subdue. Change your crude ways, can’t you? Traitorous eye, what’s new? You should be beaten through and through With a stripling birch strap or two. Traitorous eye, what’s new? What lewd pranks do have you in view? Charles d’Orleans (1394-1465) was a French royal born into an aristocratic family: his grandfather was Charles V of France and his uncle was Charles VI. His father, Louis I, Duke of Orleans, was a patron of poets and artists. The poet Christine de Pizan dedicated poems to his mother, Valentina Visconti. He became the Duke of Orleans at age 13 after his father was murdered by John the Fearless, Duke of Burgundy. He was captured at age 21 in the battle of Agincourt and taken to England, where he remained a prisoner for the next quarter century. While imprisoned there he learned English and wrote poetry of a high order in his second language. A master of poetic forms, he wrote primarily ballades, chansons, complaints and rondeaux. He has been called the “father of French lyric poetry” and has also been credited with writing the first Valentine’s Day poem. Keywords/Tags: France, French, translation, Charles, Orleans, Duke, first Valentine, rondeau, chanson, rondel, roundel, ballade, ballad, lyric, Middle English, Medieval English, rondeaus, rondeaux, rondels, roundels, ballades, ballads, chansons, royal, noble, prisoner, hostage, ransom, Valentine
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