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one llucy
Poems
Oct 2014
Overwhelmed
As I open the door
The
cold
engulfs me first
raising hairs on my neck, shivers down my spine, prickles on my scalp
Next the smell
so mild, pleasant, crisp. similar to rain or dew
my lungs take in
this air
for the first time
The light begins to peek over the mountains
clearing the fog, cutting away the dark
The
quiet
is both a comfort and an uneasiness
Only the earth under my feet whispers as I walk the dirt path
The lake unblemished, like a mirror for the sky to look upon
no wind, no waves, no life
standing there, absorbing the surroundings
I am
the one
to break the silence, to shatter the utopia
as I drop the pebble in the waters…
these
ripples go on *Forever
Written by
one llucy
27/F/Ohio
(27/F/Ohio)
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