You might think it's a social commentary but to me it's just a bit of poetry. If I rant and rave about saving the whales or some jungle in Ecuador, they're just words and not for dissemination, just for you to read and it's all in my fertile imagination.
I write as I feel,I don't kneel at the feet of Shelley or Keats, if you want that instead of my kind of writing, the right kind of,bright kind of,tight kind of, then go right in and read.the difference is in the breeding,the reading is all of the same, I won't change my style nor my name just to be, a tick on your checklist for your friends to see.
This is not commentating this is my heart remonstrating with the soul that's inside me. this is my poetry take it or leave it.