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Jul 2014
I
listend to
this song while
i was still. It moved
me though. i was still and
moving at once. The song went
into my throat and stopped me from
breathing. My heart beat faster to get the
oxygen to my head, i was going to faint. Its
funny because i couldn't breathe, yet somehow
the song gave me oxygen. i felt like i was
going to faint when it played.
However, if it never played,
I wouldn't live.
I cant live
without
the
oxygen the
melody gives me.
It's out of control, the
song makes it all a contradiction.
It's in my soul, the song makes it all right.
Maybe this is what love is like? I hope
that someone, someday, will be
my song.
I wrote this in my journal as part of my beach series. I was listening to a song called better man by Paolo Nutini and another song called big eyes by Matt Corby and Bree. I decided to write about how amazing songs like these make me feel. Also I lowercased the "i" to show how little I feel because of the overpowering emotion.
Yvette Mushimiiyimana
Written by
Yvette Mushimiiyimana  United States
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